Made me smile. It's a kind of dry wit and humor that fits in well with the story, and considering that the tree pretty much tripped her I like how it ties in with the feeling of nature trying to trick her.
I'm curious for more! You've got a good set up here and I like how you've introduced Juliet and given us a bit of info on her as well as showing her personality through her thoughts and actions (like her bike for example).
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She swore. The leaves were unimpressed.
Made me smile. It's a kind of dry wit and humor that fits in well with the story, and considering that the tree pretty much tripped her I like how it ties in with the feeling of nature trying to trick her.
I'm curious for more! You've got a good set up here and I like how you've introduced Juliet and given us a bit of info on her as well as showing her personality through her thoughts and actions (like her bike for example).
*cheers* Don't give up!